The young couple
They can see the glow a hundred miles away it’s night and they’re on an empty desert highway. They’ve been driving for two days. They grew up in a small town in Ohio they have known each other their entire lives, they have always been together in some way, even when they were too young to know what it was or what it meant, they were together. They’re nineteen now. They left when he came to pick her up for the movies, they went to the movies every Friday night. She liked romantic comedies and he liked action films, sometimes they saw cartoons. They started the weekly outing when they were fourteen.
Screaming, he could hear her screaming as he pulled into the driveway. He ran into the house her mother was dragging her along the floor by her hair. Clumps of it were missing. There were scratches on her face. There were bruises on her neck. He pulled her away and when her mother tried to stop him he hit her mother, she tried again he hit her mother harder. Mother stopped trying.
He picked her up and carried her to his truck, a reliable old American pickup with a mattress in the back and a camper shell over the bed. He set her in the passengers seat carefully set her and he covered her with his jacket. She was sobbing bleeding it wasn’t the first time it would be the last. He got into the driver’s seat, started the engine, pulled out as he pulled out Mother came to the door with a hammer and watched them drive away, didn’t move, didn’t say a word, just stood in the door holding a hammer, her daughter’s blood beneath her fingernails, her daughter’s hair still caught in her clothes and hands.
They lived in a small town in an eastern state it was nowhere anywhere everywhere, a small American town full of alcohol, abuse and religion. He worked in an auto-body shop and she worked as a clerk at a gas station and they were going to get married and buy a house and try to be better people than their parents. They had dreams but they called them dreams because they were unrelated to reality, they were a distant unknown, an impossibility, they would never come true.
He went back to his parents’ house they were in a bar down the street. He locked the doors of the truck and kissed her and told her she would be fine and he walked into the house. He went to the bathroom and got aspirin and Band-Aids, he went into his room and pulled a video game case from out of the drawer. The case held every cent he had $2,100 he had saved for their wedding. He took it out and put it in his pocket he grabbed some clothes and he walked out. He got in the truck she had stopped crying. She looked at him and she spoke.
What are we doing?
We’re leaving.
Where we going?
California.
We can’t just up and go to California.
Yes, we can.
We can’t just walk away from our lives.
We don’t have lives here. We’re just stuck. We’ll end up like everyone else, drunk and mean and miserable.
What’ll we do?
Figure it out.
We’re just gonna leave and go to California and figure it out?
Yeah, that’s what we’re gonna do.
She laughed, wiped away her tears.
This is crazy.
Staying’s crazy. Leaving’s smart. I don’t want to waste our life.
Our?
Yeah.
She smiled.
He pulled out turned west and started driving towards the glow it was thousands of miles away, he started driving towards the glow.
james frey rocks, i hope its as good as his last two books which had me in tears………..cant wait to get a copy if you havnt read his other books especially ‘million little pieces’
—daniel.r (2008-11-10 14:31:42)
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Bright Shiny Morning was the only book I have ever read that brought me to tears. I have no idea what it was about this book that hit me, but it hit me hard. I really want to read this book again, but I’m not sure if I can. It made me feel too much.
—Ally (2008-12-02 00:43:10)
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Ally: I completely agree with you. I just finished the book–my stomach is tied in knots and my makeup has run down my cheeks.
This book was absolutely amazing. I am willing to say that this is the best book I have ever read. I got so emotionally involved with some of the characters that I ended the book in a fit of hysterical tears. Dylan and Maddie—wow.
Frey’s writing style made a fabulous story line one hundred times better. He is to the point, yet allows the reader to really feel what is going on. By the end, I felt like I had been at Dylan and Maddie’s wedding and was in their apartment when those guys dragged him away.
I want to read it again.
—Kristyn (2008-12-31 03:03:46)
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i totally agree about Dylan and Maddie i felt as tho id stood on the alter with them taking their vows a week later they are still on my mind x
—Natalie (2009-08-01 22:56:57)
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His writing is compulsive even though all that he writes and talks about is arrogant and agressive and shady. When is he coming to the UK?!?! I have a need to see this man who carries this mind in the flesh.
—Lowenna (2009-01-23 14:48:58)
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i just love your books and i dont care what anyone says. real or not i never laughed cryed and felt as if i was a part of a book until now. keep writing and ill keep buying!! cre
—cre (2009-01-27 15:21:50)
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I lovelovelovelovelove Dylan and Maddie. I couldn’t handle the ending of their story…
—ErinParis (2009-05-01 18:30:33)
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James you are amazing.
I am the wife of a recovering addict and you do not even realise the impact your books have had on our minds.
It helped me so so much to understand a bit more and it helped my husband that little bit more on how to just ‘HANG ON’.
I just wish I had more more more.
I just wanted to say thankyou and your writing really has touched us.
Leonni
—Leonni (2009-05-29 04:25:01)
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After reading this excerpt I’m really looking forward to reading the book. I’m engrossed in a million lttle pieces right now, James I love the way you write. Greetings from Suzanne in Dublin
—Suzanne (2009-07-13 12:29:37)
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I laughed with you, cried with you, felt your pain, your love….absolutely brilliant books James. Love your style of writing-when I start reading I just can’t put it down until I’ve finished!
Your an inspiration,you have given me the courage to carry on with my life-all the pain suffered makes us stronger people. Love & Peace
—Lese (2009-07-22 22:51:46)
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Ive read a million little pieces over and over so many times and my friend leonard maybe 20times – i read BSM in 2 days couldnt put it down and am still affected by it a week later i need to know more i miss the characters and want to more about how they end up……….
I love the way james writes and i cant wait for more, love from Glasgow, Nat xx
—Natalie (2009-08-01 22:55:30)
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James, does Dylan return??
—Michael (2009-08-15 08:50:42)
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I just finished Bright Shiny Morning & I’m dying to know more about Dylan & Maddie..
Please keep ‘em coming.
—Ally (2009-09-23 22:25:42)
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just finished BSM brilliant just like million and leonard,a 2 day read i would have done it in one day if i had time,needed to know what was happening to the chareters like many of your other readers i need to know what happens to Dylan and Maddie,and does Old Man Joe find what he’s looking for? keep it up look forward to your next one,go well Mel Cape Town
—mel powers (2009-10-13 10:15:58)
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when do you bring your next book out can anyone tell me??? what happened to Dylan and Maddie? i was like no NO this is crazy!
—Doug Adams (2009-12-02 17:43:32)
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I agree! I couldn’t believe their chapter ended the way it did. I was so sad to see that it just ended, I was wondering if there was going to be a follow up to this book?
—tf (2010-05-03 00:22:31)
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